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Eccles |
posted 07-04-99 06:50 PM ET
Hey, this a trial story for me, so any critism is welcome. I is going to be a saga, a bit like Elemental's oddessy. But prehaps a bit shorter. Enjoy! The Line of Resistance " Disgusting!" " Even their closest ally is regarded with dark suspicion, tell me do you think we can trust our erstwhile allies, the Spartans?" Miriam always knew how to turn around a debate. " Even the ally of the moment is regarded with dark suspicision, their society is structured around continual war, it provides the psycological state to maintain the Government -George Orwell 1984 DATALINKS" " Yes, thank you PAULINE, but can we get onto the topic, however interesting Spartan society is" "PAULINE! Give me visual on the Battle for Judgement Seat" Miriam, again jumping around like a hyperactive Darleok. The centre of the wooden slab was filled with solid 3D images. The projection came from the ceiling, and it seemed to have the depth and color of a real object! "We stole it from a University Lab, we hope to have it in mass production faster than they will" The contoured map flashed, and zoomed in on the marshlands below the perimeter defence of the base. Judgement Seat was one of the largest of the 14 Believer cities, 120,000 citizens.
"Negitive Rover FI17W, we need every man we have, even in your state" The Entire squad seemed to go crazy, the channels were filled with people praying for salvation, this battle was not going to be easy. Jace refused to pray, no inquistor was going to question him after this... All of a sudden the ground shook, as if their had been an Earthquake. The rover about 100 yards from Jace had erupted in smoke, black dense particles billowing out into the air. The crew had come running out in time, but they fumbled for their helmets in the blaze, unsuccessfully as they writhed in the poisonous air, Jace could almost hear their gasping, but it was too late. |
Eccles |
posted 07-05-99 01:03 PM ET
Parts 3 and 4 Any critism? I am doing this quite fast, because I want to get as many ideas as I can, before I dry up. PT3 PT4 They sat down on a viewing bench, a massive plate glass window showed the exotic landscape outside. insane towerblocks rising in improbable places. Palm trees studding the outside like little soldier ants. |
Hydro |
posted 07-06-99 04:14 PM ET
Eccles, you�ve piqued my interest! The Believers have always been my most hated faction (although the most dangerous, in my opinion, is the Hive), and delving into such a twisted society is always interesting. Plus, the Believers as the largest faction is a little scary! My only question is where are the Gaians and the nasty �ol Hive? Will they be making an appearance? I hope to see more soon!! I do have one suggestion, though. Be sure to put an extra carriage return after your paragraphs. Otherwise they tend to run together, which make it a little hard to read. White space is good! Hydro |
Eccles |
posted 07-06-99 06:27 PM ET
Thanks for the advice on spacing. You will have to read on to find out about the Gaians and the Hive, there will be a few twists in the tale.... |
Hydro |
posted 07-06-99 06:34 PM ET
One more thing... Be sure to post your fiction on the Apolyton site (I checked and I didn't see it there). |
Eccles |
posted 07-06-99 06:42 PM ET
Where do I post it on the Apolyton site? I had a look, and posted it in the stories/diplomacy thread. Where it sank like a lead balloon. |
Hydro |
posted 07-07-99 09:07 AM ET
Hmmm... I checked the Apolyton AC Forum again and didn't see your post (the last post was 7/2). Did you post it on the AC-Strategy/Game Stories portion of the forum? Hydro |
Hydro |
posted 07-07-99 09:10 AM ET
Hmmm... I checked the Apolyton AC Forum again and didn't see your post (the last post was 7/2). Did you post it on the AC-Strategy/Game Stories portion of the forum? Hydro |
Eccles |
posted 07-07-99 05:36 PM ET
Pt5 Dear Sir ps. Sorry for the delay in transmittion, we recieved these only a few hours ago. Edit Script, date 17th 0900 REFERENCE C:13 16:30-17:00 LEAVE BLANK PENDING GOVERNMENT TRANSMITTION Endscript
Arrest for Mr Paul Mellville- 23308 Journalist Wanted alive. Signed
Reason Permission Suggested Method: Hanging. TREASURY, MASS CREDIT TRANSFER Total - 2864 Energy Credits. signed
The car sped out of the station, just as the gates of the permeter defence locked shut. He stroked the patch of skin on his arm, where the chip was embedded. His Computer flickered and bleeped at him, he had several important assignments to do today. Meeting with Chairman Yangs Hologram. 17:00pst The computer reeled off the statistics. His eye wanted to spit out the little vermin, a reaction caused by exhaustion he was told. The clock in the corner of his eye told him the time was 16:30 PST exactly. The local time was only about midday. Philby craned his neck, looking for anybody walking around in the outskirts of town. A few people were congregating around the statue to the Human Genome Project. People were still laying flowers, in memory of Prof Hollis, the co-ordinator of the Genome project. He had died last week in a rover crash. A red lance shot up past the top of the train, crawling to a stop between the twin peaks of the University Parliament. Philby put his hand in front of his eyes, to his surprise, he could see the bones in his hand. A deep rumbling eminated from the ground. He could feel air pushing at him, outside air!. Then blackness.
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Eccles |
posted 07-09-99 01:36 PM ET
Another part of my epic.Pt6 "My fellow Believers! Today we have entered into a new stage of conflict. " I come with the truth. It was us that fired the weapon! " But there were several important reasons that we chose the University to suffer our wrath. They were as dirty as jews! Selling their arms, feigning neutrality. We have collected many intelligence reports indicating that the University was massing it's forces to attack us, and soon. We could not cope with the extra forces, that is assured. Nuclear Weapons are devices of such horrific destruction that God must have created them for one reason. But we know the purpose of this weapon. The atomic bomb is a demonstration of God's power. We will use it to lance out the abcess of the University. They were researching 'The Theory of Everything'. This abomination is the utmost act of hereasy and contempt I had ever heard of. They must be destroyed by the rightous. Rest assured God is working with us, he is our strength, and our shield. "CUT!" " Ok, that was fine Miriam, Broadcast in 10 minutes. " |
Eccles |
posted 07-12-99 06:50 PM ET
PT7 Zakarov had a headache. This was not the kind of headache that could be relieved by asprin, or even a head-cold, that could be eradicated by one of Planet's anti-biotics. Planet's anti-biotics were curious. The structure of the anti-biotic was such as that several fungi needed to produce the consituent parts. They needed each other. Even more surprisingly was that they only attacked alien bacteria! Zakarov had several interesting thesi about this, he had often browsed that datachip. They had done it! He didn't need the training he had in the Russo-Sinai war. He knew the effects instantly. The initial heat would vapourise the Central Complex, and the Twin Towers. The Flash ignition of the tarmac and the park would kill anybody outside. ' The shockwave would then level any towers that were not vapourised. The entire city was build up. Rather than as a sprawl. Zakarov cursed this design. He had developed it himself. In the first year. He had never though of the possibility of nuclear survival. Just efficency and economics of scale. He was at heart, still an engineer. As well as a theoretical physicist. The blast wave had pulverised the remaining citizens. another 100,000. That left 25,000. He pondered this. Then he remembered what the mindworms did when the VX gas was first tested. The survivors would be huddled in a pulverised pit,the ground a metamorphic crater. Then wave apon wave of mindworms would devour the hapless civilians. 275,000. Dead. No survivors. There was some consolation. He could sell the WatchVid rights to Morgan. |
Eccles |
posted 07-18-99 08:18 PM ET
OK. ONCE AGAIN! SOME COMMENTS PLEASE! Pt8 The console beeped. ' Welcome Sister Miriam. You have 6 messages.' Miriam laughed. She placed the projection unit on the ground. The images would be projected life size, just in front of her desk. This reminded Miriam of Star Trek. She was one of a few very lucky people to have seen it. The censors had considered the original series to be 'ungodly and containing too much sexual interaction'. Lal's face hovered about 2 meters from the ground. He looked as miserable as ever. His beard had long gone white and he looked frail. She cut him off. "Computer! Open frequency two" Morgan, looking as full bodied as ever, started his tirade. She cut him off. "Frequency three" Yang, enigmatic as ever, a bare wall behind him. She cut him off "The Gaians" Miriam sighed. Deidre barely had time to condemn her before she was cut off. ' Now it was time for business'. Miriam thought. The computer suddenly flashed ' Twin UOP Needlejets.loc 3,4,14. Targeted and destroyed.' Miriam reclined in her chair. She punched in the commands to hail Zakarov. " You....bitch! How dare you attack us. You had no reason to attack! " He lapsed into incoherent Russian. Miriam maintained her gaze. " You are the most ignorant, toxic and blind little whore that I have ever seen." He stopped suddenly. Aware of her stare, " Are you quite finished?" She asked coldly. She imitated the lecturers voice, that Zakarov often used condesendingly. " You were supplying arms and technologies to our enemies. You were building up forces along side our border. We have proof of an alliance with Lal. In which you were going to attack us, without provocation, It was simply more efficent to strike first." Zakarov virtually had a spasm in front of his vidscreen. He bit his lip, paused and started to lecture her back. " That doesn't explain the movement of your military". " The only reason we reinforced our border was because you were reinforcing your border. Tvarch!" Miriam was taken aback by this. The color from her face was gone. " My, how you are a hypocrite..." She smiled to herself. " How am I a hyp" " You preach logic and the irrelevence of emotions. Yet you remain a creature of emotions. God cannot work with such a misbeleiver as you. That is why we attacked" She hung up. 'Three...Morgan..Unity Rovers....KIA' The computer showed urgently. Santiago was the key. She will speak with her, prehaps lend an ear. Miriam was perterbed by the information she had recieved from Zakarov. Prehaps he was right. "Frequency 6" The body of Santiago appeared in the middle of the room. She was quite transparent. As Miriam would be. Miriam stood up and walked towards her own holoprojector. Santiago kept the old style, just to bring her presence to the opposition. She looked as she did on the Unity. She was tall, well built, but with eyes that peered out from her high cheekbones, giving her a feline appearance. How far could she trust her. " When beholding the tranquil beauty of the ocean skin, one forgets the tiger heart that pants just below the surface..." "Yes thank you PAULINE, Sorry Colonel, AI troubles.." .." Herman Melville -Moby Dick, Data.." "OFF!" Miriam barked. Santiago laughed. Her hands swayed at her sides. She grinned, a most unusual gesture. " Only the lives of the faithful are sacred." Santiago rolled her eyes. " Now! when are you going to send your reinforcements?" Miriam clasped her hands together. Santiago smiled. Santiago cut her off. Miriam took account. The alliance was at war with her. Morgan and the Peacekeepers. No doubt the University would be at war soon. The Gaians had threatened vendetta, but only if another planet-buster was used. The Hive was absorbed in it's war with the Spartans. The Spartans were neutral. She had three enemies and no allies. She would have to revise the strategy, again. The Door in front of her slammed. Gillian was staring at her. |
Eccles |
posted 07-24-99 07:08 PM ET
Any critism at all please! PT9 THE BATTLE FOR ORBIT The Portia began to spin in greater earnest, the few pinpricks of light now streaks on the glass. Simon smiled across to Kell, who acknowledged his fear. Kell returned to his communications with HQ. He talked directly into his wristwatch, mentioning times, and safety checkouts. His muttering became inaudible above the Portias main engine. This is it! thought Simon, hoping that the assault would be over, soon. The twelve faces in the holding bay all reacted in different ways, clenched teeth, twitching hands. So this is what group fear feels like, pondered Simon. But he only needed one thing, to look into Kell's eyes and feel the strength within. Kell was not apprehensive. Infact now he was giving the final briefing. They had come into close dock " Ok, we are approaching Helena base now. I expect you know the drill by now. Unmarked suits, remember! The orders carried on. Kell was attempting to squeeze into a Flexi-suit. These suits were not pressured, except in the helmet. The body being held in at SP by the force of rubber. This had the benefit of being safer if the suit was ruptured. only one region would suffer the effects of space. No doubt the region would get expansive bruising, and either burnt or frozen in agony. But safer than any old pressure suit. The suit was also much freer. Simon was suited up. As were Thorus and Penepole, his team members, all joined by the mercenary bond. The equipment was nessesarily primitive, to give the impression of mercenaries, not Spartan funding. Still more than enough to beat off an University space base. Kell went out with team one. Simon followed shortly after. He switched to internal oxygen just as the airlock pumped out it's air. Simon again saw the grin as Kell picked up the radio detonator, He set it off. Nothing! He was about half way there when the bomb went off. No sound of course, but several bits of debris flew in all directions, demonstrating the power of the explosion. One chunk had hit Roderigo. Simon instinctively fired his thrusters, to reach him. Kell pulled him back. Telling him that it was too late. Kell cut the transmittion, talk about demoralising. Ack! Back to business. Team two were now to take advantage of the hull breach. They were to rush in and seixe the living quarters. Ludicrously small that they were. He checked the shredder pistol, as did the rest of his team. They moved in formation to the side of the habitation deck. The air had long since flooded out. The living quarters were on the third ring, at the top of the pivot that housed 'The Weapon'. The massive array of solar panels, sheeted on top of the pivot, had already begun to fold. The AI was thinking for itself and like a good AI it didn't want to fry the ground, if the microwaves went off course. They drifted into the 10m room. Simon felt the reassuring grip of his magnetic boots. The lights had been burnt out, but they had built in torches. He noticed that the blast had not severely damaged the inside of the compartment. The Blackened sections and bits of hull were scattered around the first few metres of the hole. Kell was an expert, despite the surprising bit of metal that killed Roderigo. They found nobody in the room. They also didn't find the console that they were promised would be there. Without the console, and a keycard, they could not evacuate the air on the other decks, or even open the airlock to invade the other sections. The only way forward would be to burst the door from this room, and search the deck, which would deviod of air, and hopefully life. Signalling this information to Kell, he told his team members to grab onto something. He got a doorbuster out of his belt, and placed the tiny black disc on the flywheel of the door. Quickly he grabbed for a handhold about 1m away from the hole. He felt the floor shake beneath him. Several sections of the door fell forwards, but mostly it fell backwards into a corridor. Then the air rushed out, like a ferocious wind. Simon felt buffeted by the wind, he could feel it roaring against his helmet. He saw various objects fly past his vision, some papers, some towels. An impact pistol? That was omimous thought Simon, as he let go. Physically gesturing to his team mates, he took out his pistol again, and stepped over the remains of the door. The corridor was circular, naturally, it also had several consoles. Without a keycard they were useless. At least they could get in. University security was pretty low, especially on an orbital solar plant, which was considered out of raiders reach. Not even a retinal scan was needed. Scientists were scientists. The corridor was only about 5m wide, so he stood two abreast, along with Thorus, and Penepole covering from behind. They furtively searched for doors, or even bodies, as they trapsed the long circumference. Suddenly the wall to the left of him wrenched and tore. Kneeling and rolling to the right Simon noted that they looked like impact shots. Damn partical impactors! Damn lack of sound! Any bastar.d could sneek up on you in a vacuum. His team members fired back, they obviously saw something he didn't. His team members told him that there was a guy in a suit sniping in a doorway, around the 'bend'. He had pulled in, after trying to blow Simon's head off. A grenade would destroy a keycard no doubt. So they had to clear out the room, the old fashioned way. Penepole ran to cover the door arc, standing up. Whilst he rolled into the doorway, trying not to get shot. Thorus followed him into that position. All three of them scanned the visible area, nothing! They must be at either side of the doorway. Difficult, but at least they couldn't hear us, whilst we could spend all day planning, if we wished. But they were Spartan! They were trained in this. Plan A was gas, obviously unworkable, Plan B was Grenade, unworkable. Plan C, was to shoot up the place, like a nut. The Spartans liked Plan C. Penepole, started firing above their heads, covering the doorframe. Simon and Thorus stood up, pistols drawn, they burst in at opposite sides. Simon let off a volley of Shredder shots, at the person who was standing in the middle of the room. The person was obviously looking at where Penepoles shots were hitting. He barely had enough time to loose a shot off, which missed, before Simon waxed him. Simon continued to fire at the man, hoping to kill him, before depressurisation got him. Spartan honour prehaps? Thorus didn't fire a shot, his side was clear. The door was set slightly to the right of the room, meaning that when Thorus jumped to the left, there was basically nowhere for a person to stand. Simon scanned the room, obviously Rec room, judging by the books, and arcade machine. The dead guy was wearing a military uniform, obviously not a Scientist. Judging by previous University soldiers, this guy was a Captain. 1st Lft Simon Austin saluted him. The station was prepared. How? Why? He grabbed the goon's keycard and ran to a console. Hoping that the others would cover him, in case of other malcontents. Everything ran smoothly, the air was evacuted in all of the corridors, but not the rooms. The other teams were preparing a break in. Power was shut down, so the Microwave transmitter didn't work, nor did the lights, only AI and life support. The computer refused the request to turn off sentry guns. However, all that was needed now was to kill any remaining resistance, capture any Barneys that are around, and get their own Barneys to reconfig 'The Weapon', just so the Believers could buy shots off them. Easy! But they had Spartan training and they would win. In time for the Ganymede as well. |
Eccles |
posted 08-06-99 05:31 PM ET
Ok, sorry for the delay. I have been busy, with rehearsing for the Edinburgh Fringe and all...... PT10 " So you did your own thing!" Gillian was ramping up her tirade. " You stupid, stupid bitch, don't you know how much trouble this has caused us?" Miriam snarled. "THE UNIVERSITY WERE HELLSPAWN!! WE HAVB MADE TOO MANY COMPROMISES!!!" Miriam finally lost her cool " To allow lucifer to grow amoungst us is wrong, more wrong that killing. Their souls were lost anyway." " GILLIAN! If you do that again, I will have you arrested for blasphemy" " Arr, tis a hanging offence Mr Proctor" Gillian muttered. The Crucible was banned, obviously. Miriam shot her with an impact pistol. |
IkshahI |
posted 08-09-99 11:21 PM ET
Eccles when you posted, our forums were temporarily down, I'm REALLY sorry about that. Please post again at our forums http://www.sidgames.com/forums/ If you want, we can publish your story on SidGames like we have for the COFH, CPUB and DD |
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