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Author Topic:   New Faction, Check it out, let me know what you think.
Picker posted 04-14-99 07:45 PM ET   Click Here to See the Profile for Picker   Click Here to Email Picker  
This is a faction I have created based on the D'Haran from Terry Goodkind's the sword of truth series. I haven't tested it yet so bear that in mind.

;
; Sid Meier's ALPHA CENTAURI
;
; FACTION FILE: D'Haran Empire
;
; Copyright (c) 1997, 1998 by Firaxis Games, Inc.
;
; To use this Faction file select load from
; faction select in the game and write... D'HARA
;

#D'HARA
D'Haran Empire, The Emperor, D'Harans, M, 2, Richard Rahl, M, 1, 0, 1, 0, 1,
TECH, Mobile, TECH, Physic, FACILITY, 6, SOCIAL, +++RESEARCH, SOCIAL, --PROBE, SOCIAL, ++PLANET, SOCIAL, +MORALE, SOCIAL, -POLICE, SOCIAL, ++SUPPORT, SOCIAL, -ECONOMY
Values, Knowledge, RESEARCH
Values, Power, Nil
D'Hara, D'Hara
Kahlan Amnell, Zeddicus Z'ul Zorander, Ebinissia
Emperor, bold, trusting, reckless, stubborn,
Power-hungry Maniac
destroy the Imperial Order
to save all factions from the Imperial Order
forcing us all into slavery under his rule
forcing us all into slavery under your rule
destroy the sovereignty of all the factions
destroying all legitimate rulers
destroying all legitimate rulers
slaughtering innocents
powerful army, M1
people, M1
efforts, M2
support tax, M1
keeping the Imperial Order at bay
General Reibeish
my terms for unconditional surrender

#BASES
Aydindril
People's Palace
Ebinissia
Tamarang
Hartland
King's Port
Southaven
Palace of the Prophets
Togressa
Pendian Reach
Agaden Reach
Grennidon
Tristan
Penverro
Winstead

#WATERBASES
Trunt
Drun
Callisidrin
Kern

#BLURB
People are stupid, they will believe anything you tell them, either
because they want to believe it's true, or because they fear that it is
true
^
^ Zeddicus Z'ul Zorander
^ "Wizard's First Rule"

#DATALINKS1
^LEADER: {Emperor Richard Rahl}
^BACKGROUND: {Hartland, Wood's Guide}
^AGENDA: {destroy the Imperial Order}
^TECH: {Doctrine: Mobility, Applied Physics}
^

#DATALINKS2
^+3 RESEARCH: {Lord Rahl strives to learn new things}
^-2 PROBE: {Richard's trusting nature leaves him open to enemy infiltration}
^+2 PLANET: {Being a wood's guide has given Lord Rahl an affinity for nature}
^+1 MORALE: {The troops of the D'Haran Empire respect and admire their leader}
^-1 POLICE: {The citizens of the empire enjoy their personal liberties}
^+2 SUPPORT: {The citizens of the empire are required to pay a tax to support the army}
^-1 ECONOMY: {Lord Rahl does not give merchants a free reign}
^Free RECREATION DOME at every base
^{May not use Power for values.}

#FACTIONTRUCE
#xs 440
#caption $CAPTION7
"Let us end this war, my soldiers would be better to be directed at the Imperial Order."

"Agreed, my soldiers would be better to be directed at the Imperial Order."
"No, there will be no neutrality in my war with the Order. You are either part of the D'Haran Empire, or you are an enemy."

#FACTIONTREATY
#xs 440
#caption $CAPTION7
"I am at war with the Imperial Order, $TITLE0 $NAME1, will you join me in my struggle."

"We will both strike the hordes of Emperor Jagang!"
"No, $NAME3, you are but a puppet of the Order."

I hope to find more base names when I read the story again, aside from that I like it.

Travathian posted 04-14-99 08:08 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for Travathian    
You're joking right?

I'll just say a +3 to research is overboard, +2 is a lot, 3 is far to unbalancing. That and you have how many bonuses vs how many minuses?

Governor Korian posted 04-14-99 08:16 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for Governor Korian  Click Here to Email Governor Korian     
I agree. This faction seems like it would easily dominate all others.
JT 3 posted 04-14-99 08:18 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for JT 3    
To put it in sarcasm(I quote this from Korian), can you say "superman?" This Faction needs more minuses.
Governor Korian posted 04-14-99 08:24 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for Governor Korian  Click Here to Email Governor Korian     
To give some constructive critism, I would suggest toning down the Research bonus and the morale or support bonus.
Atombomb posted 04-14-99 09:07 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for Atombomb  Click Here to Email Atombomb     
ROFL, this post rules, keep up the *GOOD* work, haha.
JT 3 posted 04-14-99 09:08 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for JT 3    
Ugh, ROFL. WE HAVE A NEWBIE HERE!
Picker posted 04-14-99 09:09 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for Picker  Click Here to Email Picker     
Okay, I've done a small test of the faction, basically just to check out the social engineering, and this is the new one.

;
; Sid Meier's ALPHA CENTAURI
;
; FACTION FILE: D'Haran Empire
;
; Copyright (c) 1997, 1998 by Firaxis Games, Inc.
;
; To use this Faction file select load from
; faction select in the game and write... D'HARA
;

#D'HARA
D'Haran Empire, The Emperor, D'Harans, M, 2, Richard Rahl, M, 1, 0, 1, 0, 1,
TECH, Mobile, TECH, Physic, FACILITY, 6, SOCIAL, ++RESEARCH, SOCIAL, --PROBE, SOCIAL, ++PLANET, SOCIAL, -POLICE
Values, Knowledge, RESEARCH
Values, Power, Nil
D'Hara, D'Hara
Kahlan Amnell, Zeddicus Z'ul Zorander, Ebinissia
Emperor, bold, trusting, reckless, stubborn,
Power-hungry Maniac
destroy the Imperial Order
to save all factions from the Imperial Order
forcing us all into slavery under his rule
forcing us all into slavery under your rule
destroy the sovereignty of all the factions
destroying all legitimate rulers
destroying all legitimate rulers
slaughtering innocents
powerful army, M1
people, M1
efforts, M2
support tax, M1
keeping the Imperial Order at bay
General Reibeish
my terms for unconditional surrender

#BASES
Aydindril
People's Palace
Ebinissia
Tamarang
Hartland
King's Port
Southaven
Palace of the Prophets
Togressa
Pendian Reach
Agaden Reach
Grennidon
Tristan
Penverro
Winstead

#WATERBASES
Trunt
Drun
Callisidrin
Kern

#BLURB
People are stupid, they will believe anything you tell them, either
because they want to believe it's true, or because they fear that it is
true
^
^ Zeddicus Z'ul Zorander
^ "Wizard's First Rule"

#DATALINKS1
^LEADER: {Emperor Richard Rahl}
^BACKGROUND: {Hartland, Wood's Guide}
^AGENDA: {destroy the Imperial Order}
^TECH: {Doctrine: Mobility, Applied Physics}
^

#DATALINKS2
^+2 RESEARCH: {Lord Rahl strives to learn new things}
^-2 PROBE: {Richard's trusting nature leaves him open to enemy infiltration}
^+2 PLANET: {Being a wood's guide has given Lord Rahl an affinity for nature}
^-1 POLICE: {The citizens of the empire enjoy their personal liberties}
^Free RECREATION DOME at every base
^{May not use Power for values.}

#FACTIONTRUCE
#xs 440
#caption $CAPTION7
"Let us end this war, my soldiers would be better to be directed at the Imperial Order."

"Agreed, my soldiers would be better to be directed at the Imperial Order."
"No, there will be no neutrality in my war with the Order. You are either part of the D'Haran Empire, or you are an enemy."

#FACTIONTREATY
#xs 440
#caption $CAPTION7
"I am at war with the Imperial Order, $TITLE0 $NAME1, will you join me in my struggle."

"We will both strike the hordes of Emperor Jagang!"
"No, $NAME3, you are but a puppet of the Order."

I had to eliminate the morale and support bonuses as well as the economy negative and as suggested toned down the research bonus to +2. New comments?

Lanke posted 04-14-99 09:31 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for Lanke  Click Here to Email Lanke     
Nope...still unbalanced...think about it for a second. You're basically taking the University and trading +2 Planet (BIG Help) for -1 Police. Hell, when you get asthetic virtues, there goes the police modifier. Toss out -1 police, add -1 Economy, and you may have something.

P.S. - SHAMELESS PLUG

Check out the "New Faction - Producers" thread for my latest (but definately not greatest) faction.

Picker posted 04-14-99 09:31 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for Picker  Click Here to Email Picker     
New Blurb, I found a better one.

#BLURB
Once committed to a fight, cut. Everything else is secondary. Cut.
That is your duty, your purpose, your hunger. There is no rule more
important, no commitment that overides that one. Cut. The lines are a
portrayal of the dance. Cut form the void, not form bewilderment. Cut
the enemy as quickly and directly as possible. Cut with certainty. Cut
decisevely, resolutely. Cut into his strength. Flow through the gaps
in his guard. Cut him. Cut him down utterly. Don't allow him a
breathe. Crush him. Cut him without mercy to the depths of his spirit.
It is the balace to life: death. It is the dance with death. It is the
law a war wizard lives by, or he dies.
^
^ Richard Rahl
^ "The Prime Edict"

JT 3 posted 04-14-99 09:34 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for JT 3    
No, -1 effeciency
Picker posted 04-14-99 09:36 PM ET     Click Here to See the Profile for Picker  Click Here to Email Picker     
Shameless Plug you say?

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